tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7493463531428255664.post737974177385397150..comments2022-08-26T00:39:20.817-07:00Comments on Games and Men: Efficient writing for video gamesKevinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13366813817098137476noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7493463531428255664.post-13581621821073840792011-08-22T16:02:21.903-07:002011-08-22T16:02:21.903-07:00I really liked the article, and the very cool blog...I really liked the article, and the very cool blogAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7493463531428255664.post-42409734121305652172011-03-29T13:46:00.268-07:002011-03-29T13:46:00.268-07:00I think you may want to add a twitter icon to your...I think you may want to add a twitter icon to your blog. I just bookmarked this blog, but I had to do it manually. Simply my advice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7493463531428255664.post-50247341325559761732011-01-15T07:39:36.930-08:002011-01-15T07:39:36.930-08:00Nice post!
When I read that assassination thing, ...Nice post!<br /><br />When I read that assassination thing, I actually thuoght there was a 25% chance of the enemies next attack would deal 800% more damage. And that just simply didn't make any sense...Rasmus Wriedt Larsenhttp://gamedev.rasmuswriedtlarsen.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7493463531428255664.post-9541015991022728072011-01-13T10:57:07.764-08:002011-01-13T10:57:07.764-08:00Hehe, definitely :)Hehe, definitely :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7493463531428255664.post-88818203405551408442011-01-13T10:34:45.921-08:002011-01-13T10:34:45.921-08:00That's true, the word "and" would ha...That's true, the word "and" would have been a better choice in that case. In my suggested rewrite it's totally eliminated so that's even better. :)Kevinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13366813817098137476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7493463531428255664.post-35721201191454407632011-01-13T10:22:40.357-08:002011-01-13T10:22:40.357-08:00"Omit needless words" :)
Nice post. I a..."Omit needless words" :)<br /><br />Nice post. I agree; removing as many words as possible usually makes writing easier to scan.<br /><br />In the Assassination example, I'd say there's an even bigger problem than the percentage: the word "but" and the change of colour makes it sound like "deals 5 physical damage" is a good thing, but "25% to increase damage dealt" is bad (or vice-versa).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com